Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Deer And Tiger - Ayisha Blevins

In Deer and the Tiger by Ayisha Blevins, tells the story of the deer that live in the magical land of Twilight Door Wood. The story shows how the deer came to live there and how they fight to preserve their land and their way of life.

This reviewer finds that the basic idea would make a wonderful children’s book however right now the book needs a lot of work to make the story better and definitely needs editing. I saw no page numbers and numerous grammatical errors that would be fixed with editing. The story itself could use more interaction with the elves and the author needs to expand more on why Slash was banned from Twilight Door Wood.

** 2.5 Stars

Carol Langstroth, Manager

Mind Fog Reviews

1 comment:

  1. Looks like a great girl book. I will be adding it to my buying list for Christmas.